Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Enticed...A change in View



  

          The fight was messy. I killed the hunter sent to find the girl but I knew more would come. I headed her direction. Amanda was moving but I could feel her coming closer. I put my hood over my head so the blood on my face would be hidden. The lights flashed through the forest trees as her car approached. I tried to keep my walk steady but the limp in my leg wouldn’t cooperate with me. To my luck she saw me and pulled over.
            “Do you need a ride?” She asked.
            I propped myself against the car to keep myself from falling. “I need help. Please help me.” I said. I thought it would be the only way she would let me near her. It was how I could keep her safe. She only looked scared gripping her steering wheel. After a moment she finally relaxed and walked over to me. The pain in my leg seemed to pull me to the ground.
            She kneeled down beside me and pulled back my hood revealing my face and showed sympathy on her own. “Let’s get you in the car. Don’t worry, I’ll get you to a hospital.”
            I tried to utter the words, tell her I didn’t need to, but she was prettier then I imagined. Her golden hair fell around me and she buckled the seat belt.
            The phrases of danger began to enter my head. “Alcatraz.” I said uncontrollably. I knew that could only mean one thing. The Sinist was near and she would be the second hunter. “Spiders crawl and teddy bears fall, the man is on to you.” My best shot at warning Amanda and all I could say were phrases that further frightened her.
            Her voice shook as she asked, “Can you tell me what happened?”
            I only wanted to tell her that the Sinist is after her along with the man she works for. I wanted to tell her the man would die himself if he knew it would mean Amanda’s death. But all that came out was “His soul unseen, the blood we bleed, out-weighs his will to die.” Suddenly the Sinist came into view, dressed as an innocent girl.  Amanda slammed on her brakes afraid to harm her. “Remain quiet and you’ll be safe.” I tried to tell her, not sure what really was coming from my lips.
            The door to her suburban was locked and I couldn’t find how to unlock it. “MURDER HER” the Sinist yelled in my head. I covered my ears in attempt to block out the loud ringing but it didn’t help. I looked up to her holding the knife I used on the first hunter.
            I needed Amanda to let me out of the car so I grabbed a hold of her. “Let me out I can save her from the Sinist, I can save her!” I tried to say. “She is doomed for eternity but I can save her. Let me save her. I need to save!”
            Amanda, terrified, ran from the car. “Somebody help!” I heard her cry. I finally broke the window and jumped out stepping into the Sinist’s path.
            Her power grew stronger as she lit up the road with her glow. “You sir cannot save her.” She told me, “Amanda and the girl will die.”
            I took the amulet around my neck and slapped it against her and her power disappeared. “It’s my job to save her, witch!” The wind had blown through her and she faded to nothing. I fell to the ground to catch my breath.
            “Amanda!” I yelled. “Mandy!? Amanda!” I limped through the forest looking for her, hoping she was all right. If anyone needed to go the hospital, it might be her. I found her laying against a rock with no will to move. I picked her up and carried her back to the suburban.
            “Don’t kill…” she murmured. “I’m just starting.” I laid her down in the back seat and drover to her home. It may have been safer for her with me around her, but it also made her a target when all the hunters look for me.
            I took her to my house, laying her on the hammock on my front porch. I lightly brushed the blond strands from out of her face noticing the blood on my own hands. I went inside and washed my face and hands and changed into clean clothes. After I wrapped my leg and cleaned up my paper work from my desk the sun had risen so I opened my fridge to decide what to make Amanda breakfast.
            “Good morning,” I said as she opened her eyes from the smell of bacon. I poured orange juice, “Hope you like blueberry waffles.”
            The breeze flowed through her beautiful hair as she sat up. “Who are you?”
            Right then I wanted to tell her everything. But this wasn’t an option. I set my orange juice down and replied, “Carl.”
            I could tell last night was still on her mind. She inspected my face, looking for wounds I imagine. “The blood last night, was that even yours?”
            “No, I’m sorry. I must have sounded crazy last night.” I scratched my head and thought about the mind hold the Sinist had on me. “I wasn’t myself.”
            Amanda stood up, weak from the little sleep. “What tin the world happened last night?” she asked and held her hand to her head.
            I wanted to tell her. But was it too soon? I had to keep it limited. The less she figured out the better. I could tell her what she knew. “That girl,” I explained, “wanted to kill your daughter.”
            The shock on her face hurt. I didn’t want to see her confused, but my orders were specific. She placed her hand on her tummy and said, “I don’t have any children.” I smiled in hopes of lightening the mood. She grabbed her keys and rushed to her suburban, mumbling something only dogs could hear.
            She hopped in her car but only sat there. Do you know how important she is? I wanted to ask her. Does she realize how great her daughter really is? “Is there something stopping you from leaving?” I asked.
            The look she gave me was unpleasant. “I just found out I was pregnant yesterday. I haven’t even told the father yet. I haven’t told anyone yet.”
            I smiled as I thought back. “I know.” If only you knew how he was going to take it, I thought to myself.
            “What’s going on?”
            I chuckled slightly then headed back inside.
            “Wait!” she ran after me, “tell me what that was last night?”
            “All you need to know is that you’re safe and sound if you stay here with me.”
            “But what does that mean? And how do you know I’m pregnant? And how do you know my name?”
            “Look” I tried to stop her when we reached my living room. “I know you have all these questions but there isn’t a whole lot I can tell you.” I handed her my phone. “Here, why don’t you call him.”
            “Call who?”
            “Tobey, the father.”
             I sat down and watched as she paced, nearly pulling her hair out.  “I haven’t seen him in three weeks. This probably isn’t the best idea.”
            I knew she wouldn’t do it. She isn’t supposed to until after the child is even born. “Don’t worry about it.” I took the phone from her. “I’m sure you will tell him you’re ready.”
            She plopped herself on my couch. “So, creepy Carl knows I’m pregnant, with a girl apparently, and saved me from a knife murderer that glows. Are you sure you can’t explain any of that?”
            I walked over to my desk and pulled out my papers. I searched through looking for the picture. I found it, slightly wrinkled. I knew I couldn’t tell her anything, but if I showed her, she might trust me. I handed the picture to her.
            “What’s this?” she asked before closely examining the photo.  It was of her and her daughter on top of a boat both smiling. Her daughter was sixteen in the picture. “This can’t be me, is it?”
            “All I can tell you is I am here to protect you. This was a happy moment in your life. I only hope you can reach it.” I kneeled before her. “Say you’ll trust me.”
            Without hesitation she whispered, “I trust you.”
            I stood up and gathered a few of my things. “You better get to work. I’ll be around if you need me.” Then I walked out the door.

Saturday, June 22, 2013

Enticed


            Driving home from work, Amanda saw a figure walking on the side of the road. She pulled over and rolled down her window, “Do you need a ride?”
            The hooded man stepped up to the window and set his blood cover hand on the mirror of the suburban. “I need help.”
            Amanda froze in her seat.
            “Please help me.” He moaned.
            Amanda slowly stepped out of the vehicle and walked to the other sized where the man and fallen in weakness. She pulled back his hood to reveal the young man in pain. “Don’t worry, I’ll get you to a hospital.”
            After placing him in the front seat of the suburban she shut the driver door and started the engine, heading down the road that slithered through the forest.
            “Alcatraz.” The man mumbled, “Spiders crawl and teddy bears fall, the man is on to you.”
            Amanda’s breath slowed as he continued rambling. She became aware of every swallow in her throat. “Can you tell me what happened?”
            “His soul unseen, the blood we bleed, out weighs his will to die.”
            Her eyes remained on the road ahead only to halt. Her shoulders and neck tensed when a young girl stepped into her path. The tires shrieked and the young man yelled. “We will not die if we will not cry! We will not die if we will not cry!”
            Amanda, frozen once more, stared into the girl’s cold eyes. The girl lipped the words ‘murder her’ as she held up a knife covered in blood. The man gripped Amanda’s shoulders and held her close to his face. “She is doomed for eternity but I can save her. Let me save her. I need to save!”
            Amanda released herself from the man’s grip and snatched her cellphone from the center consul running from the scene.  She ran through the pines dialing with struggle. “Somebody help, somebody help.” She said, “I can’t die alone out her-“. Amanda tripped on the log, her head colliding with rock.
            The young man kneeled on the pavement crying and moaning. The young girl stepped up and placed her hand on his head. The glow from her clothing brought his head up. “You sir, cannot save her. Amanda and the girl will die.”
            The young man slapped the amulet hanging from his chest against the girl’s forehead and her glow faded. “It’s my job to save her, witch!” The girl fell to the ground and withered to ash, blowing away in the wind.
            “Mandy!” he yelled walking through the mulch, “Amanda!”
            Amanda sat holding her head. She watched the tree’s sway as the familiar figure picked her up and carried her to the suburban.  “Don’t kill me,” she said faintly. “My life is just starting.”
            The man laid her down and drove her to his home. She later awoke in a hammock with breakfast set in front of her and the man sat in a chair beside her. “Good morning,” he said, pouring orange juice, “Hope you like blueberry waffles.”
            The wind in the high mountain air filled the silence between them as she observed the man. “Who are you?”
            “Carl.” The man replied.
            “The blood last night, was that even yours?” she asked.
            “No, I’m sorry. I must have sounded crazy last night. I wasn’t myself.”
            Amanda stood up and paced across the porch, “What in the world happened last night?”
            “That girl,” Carl explained, “wanted to kill your daughter.”
            Amanda put her hand to her belly. “I don’t have children.”
            Carl smiled in response. Amanda snatched up the keys off the coffee table and rushed to the suburban. After starting the engine she rested her head on the steering wheel. Carl took his time walking up to the vehicle and leaned in the window sipping his coffee. “Is there something stopping you from leaving?”
            Amanda groaned and forced her head up. “I just found out I was pregnant yesterday. I haven’t even told the father yet. I haven’t told anyone yet.”
            “I know.” He smiled again.
            Amanda squinted her eyes as she turned the engine off. “So then, what’s going on?”
            Carl lightly kicked his foot against the tire and turned away.
            “Wait!” she said hopping out of the suburban, “tell me what that was last night?”
            “All you need to know is that you’re safe and sound if you stay here with me.”

Man of Steel


      Finally went and saw Man of Steel on Thursday. I was so pleased, it kicked Superman Returns in the face. Christopher Nolan did an excellent job directing. Like his Batman movies it was definitely dark. I appreciated more backstory on Krypton and Zod at the beginning. Hans Zimmer's score was epic, I did find myself missing the Superman Theme though, but I can see why they left it out. With a movie so dark you would have to completely turn around the style of music as well with is what the creators did for the Batman trilogy as well.Metropolis.... I'm not sure how they will come back from that. The complete city was leveled to the ground but of coarse at the end when Clark get's his press badge out in the windows all the buildings are there and fine. I only wonder what happened to Superman taking the fight away from the people? If you are expecting color, it doesn't have a whole lot. As a Smallville fan I quite enjoy color and I enjoyed seeing many cameo's of people that had acted in Smallville, such as the military guy at the beginning who played Emil Hamilton in Smallville, and one of Zod's men, the old guy- played an old clone of Lex Luthor in Smallville, and of coarse Amy Adams herself who played a teen trying to loose weight with kryptonite infected vegetable drinks. I was a little worried with her cast as Lois Lane after seeing her play in Enchanted but for the way the film played out she did a great job. The movie was cast quite well in my opinion- and so concludes my review of an epic film of an epic icon.

Friday, June 21, 2013

. .Zeus M.D. .


Stop.
         The muscle twinges,
                  the veins expand as the scalpel cuts
                          while the surgeon is in control.
                                     With each incision he fixes trauma.

                                                                                                                                            Clanking rattles the dream of the patient,
                                                                                                                                                          unaware of the god in command.
                                                                                                                                     She’d worship if aware of the intricate design
                                                                                                                    made with precision by the tools of this medical master.

                                                                             Anesthesia has now set in.

But what of the seizer thrown toward him.
Craniotomy is now in motion,
latex snaps and the skull now cracks,
matter of grey exposed to the world,
but the surgeon takes care-the patient is saved.

                                                                                                            No good can stop what is inevitable,
                                                                                                                                    no god can save the end time.
                                                                                                                                     The heart is done when the heart is done.
                                                                                                                                                                                               This is death.
Go.


Watching Your Favorite Show


I have this show I like. It's really well made and has inspired me to really get into writing. It's helps that the actors were well chosen and the writers knew just what to say. The supernatural aspect of it really gets my attention as well. 
I like the idea of different writers getting together. It helps the dynamics of each character and their lines. I only hope one day I could be apart of that world in which I understand so little at this point. 
My favorite show I find so fun to watch that when I start it, it takes a lot to pull me away from it and watch something else. But something I did notice that bugged me were the few words they really loved to use over and over. One such word was naive. Don't get me wrong- it's a great word for oblivious and blind but they seem to use it several times in each season and I begin to wonder if they know any other descriptions. In my writing I notice when there is a repeated word and it annoys me after reading it several times. I try to break out the thesaurus and use new words. It not only helps my writing but also improves and expands my vocabulary. Now I don't have to feel little minded and dumb when I speak. 
Anyways my favorite show has put a lot of great ideas and thoughts into my head and I only wish the show could have gone on even more. I'll have to start from the beginning if I want to see all those people again. Which doesn't sound like a bad idea. :)

Thursday, June 20, 2013

The Skies of Ten


It was another dreary day,
but this one was not ordinary.
Homer saw in the midst and the mundane,
a new and special kind of dream.

At first it was simple-
a long body with few tails.
The hobby brought him out of the dark
saddened days and into a light where his future
had a chance to change. The hammer came
down from his disapproving father who sent
him off the miners land. So out by Snake Route
he found himself more determined
and free of command.

Homer did not grow weary,
he did not give up, even when
finances dampened his mood.
He took his friends along and
tore apart the tracks,
building everything from scratch.

The washers, the tails,
the nozzle, the fuel,
burning, exploding,
shooting it’s trail,
off to the unknown.

Over and over he tried and he failed
 with sudden accusations setting him back
to a point of weakness he did not want to progress from.
Tragedy blew through the air in
Coalwood like so many times before.
Lives were lost to the evil black rock
that smolders beneath hell.
Young Homer had no choice
but to abandon his long lived dream
for the sake of his brothers chance,
for the evil rock he would have faced.

Indigenous.
The math was done
and Truth emerged
with all convictions set aside!
 Liberation was in the air!
Back to school for Homer and his life,
entry to the fail for the chance to change his mind.
His college was attended,
his work he succeeded in,
such a small metal brought him so far.
He trained men to go beyond,
beyond to see what was only imagine in that dream.