Tuesday, June 23, 2015

The Core - Pilot - Act 4

So, like I've mentioned before, don't forget to leave comments, but most importantly, enjoy the story. It's very much fun to write. :) I know it's short. But it's the icing on the cake right? You tell me.  ;)




ACT IV

46. INT. SCOTT LIVINGROOM – NIGHT

The sound of rain begins as NANCY tends to JON and PAUL’s bandages and JON and PAUL sit on the couch drinking hot tea. JON and PAUL only had minor scratches, nothing broken.

NANCY
Did anybody get seriously injured?

PAUL
One of my lab techs had a lung collapse. She’s in the hospital right now in critical condition.

JON
I can’t imagine the repercussions this is going to have on your research.

PAUL
It will put us back six months. But we will get through it.

NANCY brings ice packs to PAUL and JON. MUSIC begins here to set a tone for the MONTAGE coming up.

EXT. ECHO CITY STREETS – NIGHT

RAIN is pouring down, and water rushing through the street. MICHAEL and CODY wearing raincoats stand under a streetlight waiting for DARIUS who approaches them.

DARIUS
The weather didn’t call for a storm.

MICHAEL
You’d be surprised how often the weatherman gets it wrong.

DARIUS
Come with me.

MICHAEL and CODY follow DARIUS down the street in the rain. The MUSIC is still going.

47. INT. O’NIEL PENTHOUSE – NIGHT

Through the rain covered window we see kids still having a fun time at the party. We zoom in on STELLA, NOAH, and SEBASTIAN laughing and dancing. Across from them SIERRA and EVAN are dancing together but EVAN clearly has his eyes on STELLA and is watching her intently.

48. INT. JON’S BEDROOM – NIGHT

JON walks in rubbing the bandage around his arm. SAM pats him on the back in sympathy and exits the room. JON takes off his silver jacket tossing it aside and looks up in a mirror in his room. The MUSIC is still going. He grabs a near by pair of scissors and begins cutting his long hair off.

TO BLACK:

49. INT. JON’S CLOSET – NIGHT

The door opens and JON, shirtless and with short hair, bags up black clothes to get rid of.

CUT TO:

50. INT. DEVOLA ENTERPRISES ELEVATOR – NIGHT

MICHAEL, CODY, and DARIUS wait as lights flash from the elevators movement. The door opens and they step through-

51. INT. I.C.O.P. – NIGHT

DARIUS leads them through a large open and matted area. Weight equipment and punching bags lay around the edge of the room where mirrors are on the walls.

DARIUS
Welcome to I.C.O.P. Not to be confused with the breakfast franchise. This is where you are going to train, here at the Internal Core Operations Point.

DARIUS leads them to a ‘conference’ looking room.

DARIUS
When times get tough meetings will be held.

DARIUS then leads them to a small room with two cots.

DARIUS
And in the mean time, you can sleep here, just until something more suitable is found.

MICHAEL
This seems a little much for just me.

DARIUS
This isn’t just for you MICHAEL. A source of mine says there are three of your kind, just in this city. Including you. Our goal is to find the other two.

MICHAEL
I guess this is it. My future is changed forever.

MICHAEL Takes off his coat and THE CORE SYMBOL is seen on his SHOULDER.

52. INT. SCOTT APARTMENT HALLWAY – NIGHT

Just outside his bedroom door JON walks in holding the two bags and sets them down. JON’s phone begins ringing and he pulls it out to see JORDAN calling. He answers it.

JON
Hey.

JORDON (V.O.)
I got your message.

JON
I’m sorry about that.

JORDON
I know this is hard for you when everyone you know is gone.

JON
I may have overreacted by calling you.

JORDON
I trust you will make new friends at this school. But you’ll always be distant if you hold on to the idea that we’re still friends.

JON
You know when Michael ran away, all I could think was that I was happy to have you all to myself. But now I don’t even have you.

JORDON
Maybe it’s time you leave your old life behind. Forget about Michael. He cared more about finding his birth parents than staying here with his real family. And forget about me. I’ve moved on- you should too.

JON
And you’re completely right. I guess this is goodbye for the last time.

JORDON
Goodbye Jonny.

JON clicks the phone off and stares at it. The music ends and as he exhales the phone falls through (as in literally passing through, the impossible kind of passing through) his hand and he gasps.

END OF PILOT


Saturday, June 13, 2015

The Core - Pilot - Act 3

So, If you've read the first few acts, you may wanting to know what happens next. So here is Act 3, but when I post the last act, it may be a while before I post anything on the second episode. I hardly have the first act done. So Yeah. :) Don't forget to leave comments when you are done reading.


ACT III

35. EXT. DEVOLA LABS BACK ALLEY – DAY

DARIUS is in his lab coat to take a break in the back alley. A young guy strolls through dressed in mostly black, his t-shirt in bold letters ‘NO ANIMAL TESTING’. DARIUS see’s the knife in his hand.

DARIUS
Great. You must be here to save the animals.

GUY
You have no right keeping them in there like that. What your doing is torture!

DARIUS
What we’re doing is helping you idiots to live longer.

The Young Guy runs to attack Darius. Darius stretches out his arm and stops the guy with one hand on the guy’s shoulder.

DARIUS
You really don’t want to do this.

The guy pushes Darius’ arm away and stabs him with the knife. Realizing what he’d just done he backs up slowly.

DARIUS, with pain on his face, stands up straight keeping eye contact with the guy and pulls out the knife. He then looks down to see blood on the lab coat.

DARIUS
I just got this coat dry-cleaned. Now the blood is never going to come out.

The guy bolts in the other direction, freaked out. Darius suddenly appears around the corner startling the guy.

DARIUS
You come here to save animals but suddenly human life is not important? You need to get your priorities straight.

DARIUS begins to fight the guy with very precise movements as though he’s been doing this a long time. He manages to maneuver the guys arm behind him and slams him into the alley wall the camera going black.

CUT TO:

36. INT. BACK ALLEY ENTRANCE TO HALLWAY - DAY

DARIUS walks in holding the lab coat. He rubs the blood stain on the coat and looks down at his ripped shirt where the knife had entered his skin. No scar, no wounds, his stomach is perfectly fine.

DARIUS
We’ve got to upgrade security.

FLACH CUT TO:

37. EXT. ECHO CITY STREETS – DAY

ANDREW walks among the people but a MYSTERIOUS WOMAN in a green dress catches his eye as she passes by. ANDREW begins to follow her into an alley where MUGGERS attack her. MYSTERIOUS WOMAN screams.

ANDREW
Hey!

ANDREW runs to go and save her.

ANDREW
Get your hands off of her.

SUPERSONIC flies in from above and then lands facing ANDREW. There is a slight struggle as ANDREW tries to get past SUPERSONIC.

SUPERSONIC
You can’t save her.

ANDREW stops struggling.

ANDREW
Get out of my way.

ANDREW pushes SUPERSONIC aside. He see’s the MYSTERIOUS WOMAN dead on the ground and the muggers gone.

ANDREW
What did you do? (Turns to Supersonic) We were supposed to save her!

SMASH CUT TO:

38. EXT. FOOTBALL STADUIM – NIGHT

SUPERSONIC and ANDREW are in the center of the field with a spot light shining on them.

SUPERSONIC
There is no we anymore, don’t you understand?! It’s just You!, and ME!

ANDREW looks around surprised at his sudden surroundings.

ANDREW
I started this so I could help people. So I could save them from the horrible things that happen to them everyday.

SUPERSONIC
And you can, but you need to concentrate on the science. I can’t do this forever. And from the looks of it, The Core isn’t coming anytime soon.

ANDREW
The science isn’t right yet.

SUPERSONIC
(Beat)
You’re right; the science will probably never work, but what choice do you have?

ANDREW
If I don’t fix these people, and protect them from the damage my family has caused -

SUPERSONIC
You really think taking over your father’s company was going to change all of that? You need to wake up! Not even my help is going to save this city from what your father did. These people are ruined. Scarred forever. Wake up! Wake up Andrew!

39. INT. ANDREW’S BEDROOM – NIGHT

ANDREW bursts from his sleep covered in sweat nearly gasping for air. He stands up and walks across the room to a glass of water on a table. After drinking the full glass of water he reaches for the pitcher next to the glass to re-fill it. While he re-fills the glass he turns to his clock to see the time. 8:00. ANDREW set the pitcher down and rushes to leave.



40. INT. DEVOLA LABS – NIGHT

PUAL looks up as JON walks in the back of the lab rushing in. DARIUS is off assembling equipment with tools.

PAUL
You’re late!

JON
Sorry Dad.

DARIUS
Jon, good to see you. How’s Jord….

PAUL looks at DARIUS motioning his hand to shut up.

DARIUS
…. Your mom?

JON
She’s been okay.
(turns to Paul)
Dad, did you want me to get started on the paperwork?

PAUL
Actually son, Mr. DeVola is coming in tonight-

DARIUS
At least he’s supposed to.

PAUL
-I was hoping you would want to watch the experiment we are doing. You can always clean beakers and file next week.

JON
Oh. I guess. I was kind of hoping I could just do some busywork.

PAUL
Believe me, this will be far more interesting than busy work.

ANDREW DEVOLA enters in a suit and tie holding a briefcase.

ANDREW
I apologize for not being prompt. I took a detour that lasted a little longer than I expected.

DARIUS
Great, we can get started.

DARIUS’s phone rings. He pulls it out to read ‘Michael’ was calling.

DARIUS
There is something that requires my immediate attention. Dr. Scott, why don’t you start without me?

PAUL
Of coarse Dr. Brooks.
(Turns to ANDREW)
Right this way Mr. DeVola.

41. INT. DEVOLA LABS – HALLWAY – NIGHT

DARIUS clicks ‘answer’.

DARIUS
Michael I’m glad you called. Does this mean you’ve changed your mind?

42. EXT. ECHOS CITY AIRPORT – NIGHT

MICHAEL is seen out in the rain, an airport behind him.

MICHAEL
I did. My situation in Oregon has gotten bad. I came by bus. Do you know of a place I can stay?

DARIUS
I’ll send you an address to meet.

MICHAEL
Is there room for two? I know it’s not conventional but I had to bring Cody. I’m the closest thing he has to family now.

DARIUS
Of coarse. It’s no inconvenience.

CUT TO:

43. INT. DEVOLA LABS – NIGHT

PAUL flicks a few switches, machines go vroom, lights dim.

PAUL
Is everything clear?

ERICKA
Crystal.

PAUL pulls a lever, flicks more switches and a window opens revealing a monkey.

PAUL
Meet Exhibit A. Now does everyone have their safety goggles on?

JON, ANDREW, ERICKA, and a few other LAB TECHS put their goggles on. PAUL presses more buttons and the monkey is shown being zapped by a kind of electricity beam.

Off to the side, escaping everyone’s attention a crack forms in window of a room labeled ‘RADIATION: DANGER’.

ANDREW, ERICKA, PAUL, and JON lean in to see the monkey has disappeared, no where to be seen in the experiment area.

ANDREW
Was that the purpose of this demonstration? A disappearing monkey? My magician of a cousin can simply do that.

ERICKA
Did we get the calculations wrong?

JON
I don’t get it, what was supposed to happen?

The GLASS WINDOW cracks further and a whistling of air can be heard.

PAUL
Certainly not this.

ERICKA
The object was to give the monkey an addition to its DNA molecule ultimately giving him what we would perceive as a special ability. According to the science though it would really be like making it so he’s able to tap into the dimensions that surround us.

JON
What kind of abilities are we talking about?

PAUL
Just your average flying, walking through walls, and creating storms just by thinking about the weather. Taping into the realms that are not tied down by our laws of physics.

JON
Average?

ANDREW
The science behind this is truly unreal. The benefits will not only help those who feel inferior to our modern-day superheroes, but this technology could help us create vaccines that can cure people. Imagine a world free of illness and cancer. It’s what we’ve always want-

JON
I’m not sure I understand how that works.

ANDREW
It’s like this. Imagine our world as a bubble. There are other worlds, other dimensions that exist at the exact same time. So you have two bubbles that are meshed together.

JON
Like alternate realities.

ANDREW
Sort of. Basically what are plan is- we will try and use the technology of pinpointing the virus, cancer or what have you and place it elsewhere. Killing those things is very hard to do with out killing the host. So if we can manage to just place it elsewhere using the technology of moving through these other worlds that around us, we ultimately save a human life.

JON
But what does that do to the other dimension, the other world you are placing it in?

ANDREW
I haven’t a clue.

JON
You’re doing all this to save people? Why not take advantage of the science your learning for this and explore these other dimension.

ANDREW
We don’t even know they are capable of living in. It’s hard to determine if it’s even a whole physical world like ours. It could just be black emptiness. Other parts of space without proper living conditions that we just want to stay away from.

PAUL looks up with a raised eyebrow the rolls his eyes at Andrew.

ANDREW
Though there are some who believe it’s much like here. Dirt-Air-Water: All your basic essentials just in a whole new light.

CAMERA zooms in on the cracked glass, which shatters and alarms begins to go off. DARIUS enters the lab to see the flashing lights. PAUL, DARIUS, ERICKA and other lab techs reach for a near by breathing mask. PAUL hands one to JON.

PAUL
Here, cover your mouth!

JON holds his breath but takes the mask and runs it to ANDREW.

JON
Breathe with this!

ANDREW
You must get out of here. Don’t worry about me!

Just as ANDREW takes the mask, the room labeled ‘DANGER’ explodes throwing JON on to ANDREW. The two proceed to fall through the floor into a maintenance closet beneath them, leaving the floor/ceiling unharmed. The impact of hitting the ground leaves them unconscious.

UP IN THE LAB ERICKA fell unconscious under a desk, and DARIUS pulls himself off the ground looking around. He helps PAUL up.

PAUL
Is everyone okay?

DARIUS rushes in to see what happened.

DARIUS
Holy Juledora. (Beat) Dr. Scott, where is your son?

PAUL looks around the chaos of the lab; parts of it on fire. He moves through the debris looking for JON but he only finds ERICKA unconscious and the other lab techs wandering around have dazed.

PAUL
Jon!

DARIUS
Mr. DeVola!

PAUL
Jonny!

FADE TO:

44. INT. MAINTENANCE CLOSET – NIGHT

Jon is in the closet with Andrew and the two of them haven’t a clue as to how they got there...

JON
How in the world?

ANDREW
How’d we get here?

JON
I don’t know.

JON stands up and helps ANDREW up off the ground. JON tries the door handle but it’s locked from the outside.

JON
Do you know how we can get out of here?

ANDREW
Not a clue.

ANDREW tries ramming himself into the door hoping it will knock down but the only result is an injury to his arm. JON tried jiggling the handle again.

JON
Come on, COME ON, COME ON!!

In frustration JON rests his head on the door and his hand falls through the doorknob, unlocking it on it’s way through. The door slowly creeks open.

ANDREW
How did you do that?

JON pulls his hand towards his face to analyze it. His face filled with shock and he fails to answer the question even in his own mind. JON turns to ANDREW for a beat.

JON
Come on, let’s go.

JON and ANDREW run down the hallway, lights flashing, alarms going off, and firemen running the opposite direction of them as they exit the building.

45. EXT. DEVOLA LABS – NIGHT

ANDREW
I owe you my life Jonathan.

JON is flatter in expression but looks down to see ANDREW’s leg is bleeding.

JON
Mr. DeVola,

ANDREW
You don’t have to be so formal, call me Andrew.

JON
Okay, but I think your hurt, you’re leg is bleeding.

ANDREW looked down at his leg. The sight of the blood causes him to faint.

JON
Can I Get A Paramedic Over Here!
FADE OUT.

END OF ACT III